OT: Use of "please" in technical documentation and messages on screen
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generic668 at yahoo.ca
Fri Jun 26 04:11:14 PDT 2009
I say this from my North American English-speaker perspective...
I prefer to take the Strunk and White approach to "omit needless words".
Please is needless.
As a user, I find the use of "please" patronizing.
Personally, I would reword the message to say "Wait while the result
list is updated".
Nadine
Andersen, Verner Engell VEA wrote:
> Hi
> Once I learned that you shouln't use the word "please" in technical
> documentation - that it was like asking the reader to do you favor.
>
> Does this still hold true? Is it OK to have this message displayed on
> the screen of our user interface?
>
> "We are updating the result list, please wait"
>
> Best regards,
>
> Verner
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