Use of "please" in technical documentation and messages on screen
Les Smalley
l_c_smalley at yahoo.com
Fri Jun 26 06:16:52 PDT 2009
I prefer active voice as well. An option that avoids please is to give the user an indication of how long a wait is expected, especially if it is a lengthy operation:
"We are updating the result list, this will take XX minutes..."
-- Les Smalley
--- On Fri, 6/26/09, Mike Wickham <info at mikewickham.com> wrote:
I don't know about the rules of technical documentation, but "please wait"
sounds much better than just a command to wait.
More importantly, I love that you didn't use passive voice. You used
"updating the result list" instead of the typical, "the result list is being
updated." Bravo!
Mike Wickham
----- Original Message -----
> Hi
> Once I learned that you shouln't use the word "please" in technical
> documentation - that it was like asking the reader to do you favor.
>
> Does this still hold true? Is it OK to have this message displayed on
> the screen of our user interface?
>
> "We are updating the result list, please wait"
>
> Best regards,
>
> Verner
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