[Framers] [EXTERNAL] Grammar question

[Tom Beiswenger]

I prefer "A". "Further," though, is redundant. If you are proceeding, it can be presumed that you are going further.

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Subject: [EXTERNAL] [Framers] Grammar question

Which of the two sentences is better?  Is there a "better", or is it just a matter of personal preference?

A. Remove all the covers from the supervisor and nodes before proceeding further.

B. Remove the covers from the supervisor and all nodes before proceeding further.

Thanks!
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